Destruction
I’m wondering what
you’re capable of
nice guy that you say you are
but filled with revenge
a growing need to see me hurt
and hurting
I wanted to pretend
it never happened
that you didn’t exist
I’m a person of morals, you proclaim
to the world
as you shout out whore
armed with your bible of venom
stomping on your mountain top
unleashing an avalanche
burying me
and the truth
somewhere beneath the cold
very intense for sure and good finish. great flow.
doncarroll said this on April 11, 2012 at 12:52 am |
agree. good finish. love the ending. brilliant. and the juxtaposition of being a person of morals yet yelling judgements.
njsullivan said this on April 11, 2012 at 12:27 pm |
i hope you do realise how good a poet and writer you are.
a diamond uncut said this on April 20, 2012 at 4:50 am |
Thanks. That means a lot coming from such a talented writer as yourself!
Dark Landscapes said this on April 20, 2012 at 5:03 am |